Tuesday, November 4

Opinions??




Here are a couple pictures of a sketch-up of the commissioned work I am tackling for the lady at the bank. The only instruction I got was to have a crown, the initials COP, kids bithdays and names and a Bible verse. I am wondering if you all could give me some advice before I finish it. I know that it needs to have more white space around it, so I was going to move the kids names and birthdays closer to the crown. I also know that I need to drink less coffee before I write so I don't have the shakeys when I write! This is just the mock up, so the writing isn't the greatest, I don't think...Any critiscm that I can put into it would be great!

This is the picture since I fixed the spacing on the outside edge. And I wrote the scripture smaller to make it fit better.



3 comments:

Sharon Brumfield said...

Did you do the crown?
And are you going to add color?

I think it is great and the lady is going to love it!
You must be so happy with what is happening with your talent. God is being honored so I know He is happy.

try2bAsunbeam said...

awww shucks, Sharon...
I did the whole thing...
It will be painted like the last one...
I have to re-draw it on quality paper. This is just the mock-up...I just drew what came to my head. It took me less than an hour...but don't tell my customer that! The painting and redrawing is what takes the longest. The writing is pretty simple and quick. I think I will be charging more on this one too, because the drawing is so much more involved than the last one I did...

Alisun said...

I feel it looks great too and an so amazed by this I have to say it is great of you..

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